WIP: HM Rod and Neil

I tried to draw men.

Rod and Neil from Harvest Moon: A New Beginning. I don't know if I'll color this. If I do, it'll give my gallery some variety.
If I plan to do more with this, I'll probably draw in other characters.

I've been reading shonen manga (Bleach, anyone?) for such a long time that when I try to draw guys I want to make it look as mature as possible. Which is a problem because lately I've been giving women the faces of big-eyed children. If I draw a guy and a girl in the same image, I'm going to have to figure out how to balance the styles.

Constructive criticism would be really appreciated here. :/ Of course, there'll be some major cleaning up to do.